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Do I Need a Literary Agent?

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Some authors decide to go it alone believing the commission that agents charge on the sales of the author’s book can be saved. But when one considers the amount of work a good literary agent invests into plugging an author’s book, this commission is well earned, and the author is more able to spend valuable time writing the book instead. What the Literary Agent Does This is why I would recommend using a literary agent. But perfecting, editing and polishing the work are essential, or the agent will delegate it to the slush pile. A good literary agent must act on the author’s behalf and to the best interests of all around. This will include matters of: Negotiating the best and most suitable commission for the author To inform on all legal matters, particularly on the small print To keep accurate records on all correspondence and accounts To be there to advise on concerns and queries To know the book market thoroughly as well as up to date changes And perhaps most ...

How do I Write a Novel Synopsis?

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Writing a synopsis for a novel is not easy, but is an essential inclusion in a submission package. The synopsis, or plot outline, as it is sometimes called, provides a shop window from which a potential agent can peek through before reading the novel. Getting it right can make the difference between getting the novel read and having the story rejected with a thanks but no thanks. What Should be Included in a Synopsis? click to buy from Amzon Many publishers and agents will request a synopsis along with the sample chapters of the novel. How a synopsis should be formatted can be a touchy issue, so it is important to read the publisher’s submission guidelines that can be found within the Artist & Illustrator’s Yearbook (AC Black) or looking at the publisher’s website. The following will often apply: The synopsis should be typed using a plain font, such as Times New Roman or Arial point 12. Typos and grammatical errors are banned The synopsis should be no longer than 250...

My Novel Writing Style is Bland

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Effective or unique use of adjectives, adverbs, portrayal of emotions and active writing can result in great writing style. It helps if the writer sees examples of good and poor writing to appreciate the difference. Developing Writing Style in Story Telling But to improve writing style, the beginner in novel writing must be made aware of the culprits to bad writing style which could be any of the following click to buy from Amazon Writing reams of descriptive passages that slows the pace of the novel to a standstill Using ten words when only one or two would do Using too many adjectives , adverbs and emotion words within the prose Telling rather than showing the reader what is going on in the story Too much passive writing , making the reader feel detached from the thoughts and actions of the characters Too much dialogue, action or descriptive prose within the novel making it a slog to read due to an imbalance of elements within the story The narrativ...

The Quality of My Novel is Patchy

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The author may feel a mixture of exhilaration and despair when reading the first draft of the novel, comparable to that of driving over a potholed road. This is to be expected, for the first draft will rarely be perfect. How to Edit the Novel to Perfection To create a smooth and consistent quality throughout the novel, the following editorial issues will need to be addressed, each requiring slightly different approach. click to buy from Amazon Do stereotypical characters harbour within the story? Does any of the dialogue overtly serve the plot twists or inform the reader, and does this compromise its authenticity? Is there too much dialogue or not enough in the novel, making it a slog to read? Can the two be adjusted to a more balanced ratio? Do any of the characters stand idly by doing nothing? Would the story suffer if they were cut or combined with another character? Can any of the characters be made more interesting by reconsidering their motives and past histories...

There's No Tension in My Screenplay

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With the sole aim of completing screenplay, the writer may have forgotten about strategic placement of scenes or of creating tension within the story. What may result is a screenplay that seems to reel from one scene to another without any ups or downs and an unceremonious finish. Dramatic Tension in Screenplays click to buy from Amazon Creating tension in film is what screenwriting is all about. This involves a firm understanding of the story arc, which will help with plotting the screenwriting structure. By this, understanding, the screenwriter can control tension by strategic placement of climaxes and lulls within the story. What is a Scene? But firstly, what defines a scene? Well a screenplay is comprised of a series of scenes all lined together like a chain. Each begins by a new setting or time. In each scene, something happens between one or more characters, whether this is a series of actions or discourse. In each case, there must be some sort of tens...

The Dialogue in My Screenplay is Stilted

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The screenwriter inspired with a great plot idea could be stumped when putting words into characters’ mouths. The page remains stubbornly blank after the character cue, forcing the writer to resort to clichéd dialogue that lacks distinction. How can the screenwriter make the words flow from characters’ mouths naturally? How to Write Dialogue for Screenplays click to buy from Amazon Dialogue in films forms an essential part of building tension and revealing characters. Without effective use of dialogue, the screenplay will fall flat, regardless of how engaging the plot is. This is why writing dialogue is so important. So when submitting a screenplay to a film agent or entering a scriptwriting competition, the screenwriter must ensure that the dialogue sparkles with tension and defines every character. The following tips will help: Knowing when not to include dialogue is as important as knowing when to use it. Unspoken action will often create more tension within a scree...

Make your Characters Real in your Screenplay

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Reading the first draft of a films script may reveal characters that seem to act at the screenwriter’s whim, lacking life, spine or individuality. What can the writer do to create realistic, interesting and unique characters to bring the story to life? How to Create Fictional Characters for Screenplays The conception of vivid and convincing characters is a godsend for the screenwriter, for their inner forces drive the plot. Without compelling characters, the viewer is unlikely to care about what happens to them and the story will fall flat. Character creation for film is explored fully in my website on writing screenplays . However, the following tips and suggestions may help bring screenplay characters to life. Developing a profile questionnaire Creating motives and drives Making characters speak Forcing the viewer to empathise with the characters in some way, whether the character is a hero or villain Avoiding stereotypical characters Above all, each character mus...